This was... heavy. Its so dreary, but it has a good point, and though it focuses on homosexuality it sends a message about all minority orientations. I feel for Duke and wish to see his truggle unfold.

I love Duke... So hard. So much love. SO MUCH FRACKING LOVE.

Yeah, I'm sure that Errick (did I speel that one right??) loves him too. And Ryan. We ALL know that Ryan loves him. WE ALL KNOW.

So, yes, you must hurry and post "Glitter and Grey: The Story" or whatever you want to call it... I'm sure that everyone will love it!! I'll tell Lucifer-sama about this so she can read it.

I just want to change races here for, like, three seconds, and give you mad props for writing this.

'Cause, y'know, without this story, Monarch and Jayden wouldn't exist.

I thank you for that in my ending author's note for "Who Am I This Time??"

Okies, I'm out. I love you, Chibi-Itoko!!

Luvs and strawberry pocky,--Zephyr-sama

Sad. But very well written. You should continue! I also agree that there really are no equal rights for homosexuals...don't look at me, I voted for Kerry...the world is a really screwed up place. I personally am most pissed about the gay rights issues and the whole abortion thing. Dammit, what if a girl gets raped? Well, I could go on and on about world issues...but I will shut up now and just smile and say "update soon", though I am bracing for impact...our world is about to come crashing down any minute and abortion will be just a memory, gays will be put in prison, and our oil will run out while we keep trying to nuke Iraq...*sigh* Well, on a happier note, you are a good writer and you have just received the longest review I have ever written!