I can't say exactly but I like this poem. Theres the overt scrutiny, but then theres the part that I can't read that I like. Oddly. The part thats not written. Not in a "happy smiley" kind of way. But I like it. [forgive me if you have no idea what I mean]

i can see what you mean

The last two stanzas were exceptional.

Ooh, this is just gorgeous..I absolutely love it. I love the line "the best is knowing I can't feel this pain"t'is Wonderful xD

This is really good, keep up the writing! Shitsuren ..