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Reviews For: Hansel and Gretel revisited and renovated

Arcularis
2006-11-18
ch 1,
*laughs* okay. this really was awesome! i hope you do more spoofs of fairytales..like this. i super enjoyed it, and i hope to read more of this kind of stuff.

thanks for giving me a good end to a blah day.

-Arc
Gabrielle Wing
2006-10-25
ch 1,
Hah, that was interesting, and humorously so. Evil evil children. But so what, most children tales, nursery rhymes, whatever are evil anyway. Good one. Though I can't understand a single foreign word (Spanish, Mexican...they're all the same to me) you used, I did get that they were not good. Lol. And thanks for the review. Hope you'll enjoy the rest.
GryphonFledglingOfSilverWin...
2006-05-18
ch 1,
Oh that was horrible!

*snigger*

Simply awful, how could you burn those two little children up? I'm sure they were just troubled...

*snurk*

Okay, that was pretty darn funny. I really liked how the kids were the evil little devils instead of the innocently sweetlings they were in the original story. Honestly, those fairytales are filled with enough sterotypes to choke a horse...

Anyway, great job. I luved it...

GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
grl w/ a birf
2006-05-16
ch 1,
you are a genius. u shud get this published.
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose
2006-04-07
ch 1,
I find this completely fascinating. It's hilarious! Seriously Hansel and Gretl always seemed like brats to me. Very funny!
Plinky
2006-04-07
ch 1,
Hehe, I love your first sentence. That's always a good start - made me giggle.

They really are horrible names!! I never thought about it. Haha, I like the whole drunken thing. Awesome.

"This fat Hispanic broad just came over and started whaling on us!" Hilarious.

Very very random. I actually quite like Senora Gonzales. Hehe.

Keep writing!
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