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| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-04-16 ch 1,   | 'we miss your full face' this is short but really gets to you. good work :D |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-03-30 ch 1, | This is such a powerful peice. I'm battling anorexia myself, even though no one cares enough to notice. This piece really spoke to me. |
| eighteen hundred 2006-03-28 ch 1, | I like this: strong and powerful and straigt out good. |
| Jezsh 2006-03-28 ch 1, | I like how you're written this. Powerful, accusing, full of feeling, sad at the same time. Like the last line a lot, a poignant contrast to the rest of the poem. Nice piece! |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-28 ch 1, | My good friend is in hospital right now because of Anorexia. -sigh-, great poem. Brings back a lot for me. Write on! ~Anna~ |