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| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-07-25 ch 1,  | abusewow that was so good! and its so true! i love it! keep up the good work! ~SarahJane |
| rust phoenix 2006-06-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful. Your style is very unique. It's simple, but not in the "I have a dog his name is spot he likes to eat and drink a lot" way. It's more in the using-few-words to tell a deep feeling. It's nice. It shows Japanese cultural influences! Okay, I don't really know what I'm trying to say. I'm weird today... ^_^ |
| KyuubiANBU 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abusefunky form you have there, still gets the point across. cool thing with the 'pond water green' too. noone likes that color, same as noone likes being lost. |
| Smeagol Fasir Kenobi 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, and I think I liked it even more because of the fact that I've never felt exactly like this. It's easy to say, "Oh, yeah, I know what you mean," and then read a poem. With this one, I couldn't, and that made it even more interesting.Good job, mellon nin.Namarie--Smeagol Fasir Kenobi |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThis has an emptiness feeling to it that makes the reader connect well with the emotion. Very visual. The "Lost", feeling comes across well. Well done. |
| The Postscript 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseFinally. A love poem with emotion, sparkle, and uniqueness. Whatever you did to create this piece, in all it's sparkle and thought - this was amazing. You bring emotion to love...unlike the past few love poems I've read. I love the images in this from ripples to cherry blossoms. It's a poem with a large range of colors yet you blend them all together as well. Nice job with this. Keep writing. |