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Kristin <33
2007-01-19
ch 10,
Alrighty.. well i cant send two reveiws on one chapter so im assuming i didnt write one on this chapter? even thouh i swore i did ANYWAYS! that chapter was a bit short? Oh well at least she can still goto the rehersals and see everyone right? i cant wait for next chapter i wonder how christine will feel when she goes to the rehersals how her friends will act, or even say if she tells them she cant go with them anymore ;O or is she going to rebell agenst her parents, naw christines to good for that! lol can wait for next chapter
Over'n'out care bear!
_-Krissykins_-!
Kristin <33
2007-01-19
ch 11,
CARE BEAR! omg, i lost your site for like ever i finally found it! Lol so i havnt read chapter 11 yet cause im going to re-read chapter 10 stupid parent bears! Lol well im glad to see you remembered me and put me in the top *feels so special* i just ta;led to rob yesterday omg i havnt been on palace in soo long and stuff, i miss you so much and as always ill submit a reveiw on your chapter PLEASE PLEASE write a new chapter i always love reading your books! Over'n'out care bear

_-Krissykins_-
somebody special
2006-10-09
ch 1,
Hey Kelly! This story was awesomefulness itself...please continue! (If you're wondering who I am, ask Hannah.) I love the plot! It's really cool...hurry up and write the next chapter.
under the influence
2006-10-03
ch 4,
hi...I like the story so far...a few things,

you might want to check the spacing between words and in the sentence: "Christine, please begin on line 30, please" the two please's are redundant
Kristin
2006-09-19
ch 10,
Psst Get christine to randomely call Sarah and update her about whats going on Sarah misses christine!! in the story for the next chapter Miss ya lots , and now im going to read this chapter!
Rayne Logan
2006-09-15
ch 10,
oh my god. You can't leave it there!

I'm dying in suspense! Update soon x
Kristin ;]
2006-08-26
ch 10,
Care bear awesome chapter, Shorter then youre usual Ones, I havent seen you on yahoo, youre parents not letting you use the comp anymore? if they are attempt to email me if you can or call beth, and tell her to tell me whats going on k Great chapter i cant wait till the next one ;O what has christine gotten herself into *gasp*! lol
carina0615
2006-08-24
ch 10,
haha...she's busted. cant wait see what happens next.

~CaRiNa
Elizabeth
2006-08-20
ch 9,
NO NOT A CLIFHANGER ENDING! adn it is extremely wonderful now i wanna see teh rest of the chapters
Kris
2006-08-17
ch 9,
Omg this book is so good jimminy jillicers x] Batman! xD Lol Omg im so hooked i liked died at the end of your chapter Lol i love these characters!! O i think Michael is in Love
Leaving Here
2006-08-06
ch 4,
wow. i really like it.

**sry, i am trying to read this again.

you know what is weird though? i picture Christine as some over-weight hippy girl. i have NO idea why. I think its bc i read a book once that was alike this and the main character had the same name, i think... idk. but i love your character. shes great.

~Liz
Sensualselma
2006-08-05
ch 9,
Hi,Hope you are fine...I just read your story and i think you are quite a good writer...I like it so far...read it all and i think you should continue coz its really coming out nicely...P.S. I am reviewing you because i think you're story is great...Keep up the good work...Take Care
Leaving Here
2006-07-25
ch 3,
im thrilled too with the twins! i can tell that im going to love them!

i loved the chapter!

but hey, i will read the rest later, i have to finish the chapter i was writing! i want to have it up before gilmore girls comes on- i love that show! :)

kk- i love it!~Liz
Leaving Here
2006-07-25
ch 2,
lol- i love giving cliffhangers too!

i love this story!

Wat do u need help with?

~Liz
Leaving Here
2006-07-25
ch 1,
i really like this! its abt everything i can't do : Singing amd on top of that doing it in front of people! i can NOT speak in front of people; i used to be REALLY good at it but now i sux! i got a C- in class for it...

anyway-- i really like this story! ur a great writer!~Liz
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