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| simpleplan13 2006-04-05 ch 1,   | beautifully written and I like the rhyme scheme.. well done |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-28 ch 1, | Whoa, lovely imagery here! Love the line "The rosy finger of red dawn is glowing here". Wonderful, and you know what, I like the "weird" rhyming pattern. Neat lol. |