The visuals in this are really startling, and really creepy. I like them! Also, the line breaks are placed well, and I love the title.

"Gruesome beauty" is magnificent.

Good job!

.:Scarlett:.

I really like this, partly because I've had my fair share of problems with eating disoders. . . and I like darker 's just entirely well-written and fabulous. Amazing! : D

Creepy but good.

Shivers- what a price we do pay for said beauty...

And it's NEVER worth it!

Fantastically written poem, altho such a dark subject...