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| hear me smile 2006-04-08 ch 1,   | This is very good. You have some very memorable lines in there:"But I don't know if I can live this double life And I don't know if I can live a single life." and "I look into your eyes While staring out my window". I especially like the chorus and the last verse. And the first verse. Good job. |