It's not easy to write a piece of this particular genre, but I think you did a pretty good job with this sijo. Keep it up!

this is definitely more optimistic than your other poems. i'm just glad you've found flowers that still grow in your garden.

take care my friend!

~syv

I know exactley what you mean. My family had a flower shop and with my oldest girl, we always grew a garden. When she was young, she would get upset when the flowers or vegetables would die. I like this. Kudos to you. Keep writing. Joey

am i a flower? have i wilted? hope not. nice sijo. you could be an awsome korean poet lol. :)

Not bad. Not bad at all. It's symbolic and well, pretty.:D The blob can't beat this.

Awesome sijo, Nat! :] Looks like your boredom becomes your inspiration. lol

Miss you na!

I love garden metaphors =) Nice job.