Reviews for The First Five Times

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No Ordinary Girl 2008-02-12 ch 6,	abuseAHCK! i can't believe it. i actually reread this story recently and i wondered when the next chapter would be up. it's nifty, to say the least. i knew it... i knew it... they are so meant to be. did tobias end up with another girl from the party? did elijah end up with someone? are vaughn or any of the other guys gonna get lucky? laugh at least, as lucky as jase and cady? i look forward to the next chapter with bated breath. until then. grin cheers.
LondonLi 2008-02-10 ch 6, anon.	abuseGreat job, even if we had to wait a bit. And I don't know what the next morning will bring them, but I really, REALLY want her to get ride of Tobias! Thanks for updating.
Mystery 2008-02-10 ch 6, anon.	abuseI'm so glad that you updated! The chapter was great. I can't wait until the next one comes out.
No Ordinary Girl 2007-11-13 ch 5,	abuseyayness! i almost forgot about this story until i saw the update window and then i was like, "delight!" very nice. i must admit, though, i want cadence to be with jase. poor dear, he really likes her and he was going to say something to her at breakfast until she ruined it by babbling. gaad! she's so dull. shakes head
Zara 2007-11-04 ch 5, anon.	abuseYea i agree, she should've listened to wat Jase had to say! Nd its kinda sad tht the only reason Tobias didnt cheat on her is because of who her brother is! So why is she still with Tobias?? I can tell this story is going to get very messy! Please update soon! (:
LondonLi 2007-11-02 ch 5, anon.	abuseThanks for the update. I have the feeling, though, that she should have listened to Jase speak and not to Tobias. This is going to be messy for awhile, isn't it? Hope you feel inspired again soon!
Midge-The-Hopeless-Romantic 2007-11-02 ch 5,	abusei like... very cool story update soon...
starzdestiny 2007-11-02 ch 5,	abusegetting interesting!!
Mystery 2007-06-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseI really love this story! Hope you update soon.
No Ordinary Girl 2007-06-11 ch 4,	abuseah! i'm so excited about this new development! i really hope that things with jase and cade go well. god! i really love your stuff. i finished TET in like two days. it took a little longer than i had hoped because i had to go and get some of my stuff from moving, but i absolutely loved it. your writing style is so catchy. i adore your work. hopefully the next chapter will be out soon! grin ehm, i think that tobias is going to be none too pleased at this development, most definitely... or vaughn either for that matter. i do think that jase and cade are good for eachother though. the whole older brother's best friend thing. the trust that their little sister won't get hurt... unless it's like TET, but we'll leave that out for now. O__o yeah. anyways, i'll say again, love it, and i hope to see something new soon! latuh! ~bleu
KageNeko 2006-11-28 ch 4,	abusehahaha I love it ^^ Jase makes me happy, and yet i feel sorry for him...cuase he got caught up in somethign that will probally turn messy...Other wise. WOnderful update, keep it going ^^
catharsis7 2006-11-28 ch 4,	abuseHa, I kind of figured that would happen. I like Jase better anyway, but I doubt Tobias is going away anytime soon.
I Am The Bunny Slayer 2006-09-26 ch 3,	abuseNow see, this is really intriguing. I'm wondering what the title's all about.Also, since you mentioned her brother's best friend in the summary, amd I right in assuming Jase is gonna get all tangled up in this soon?
KageNeko 2006-09-06 ch 3,	abuseWonderful update,i enjoyed it very well, good job, thank you for the privalege of reading your work, keep it up^^
saii 2006-09-05 ch 3,	abuseIt's Jase she belongs with, not Tobias. I think that even though Tobias cares for her he'll end up hurting her. Anyway, great story, please continue.

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