Hey,

I like this poem it reminds me of some of the poems i wrote a few years back. Great imagary in it aswell. By the way i no exactly what you mean about being embrassed by it but i was talking to this girl on the bbc poetry site gave me some advice that by putting up past poems it shows people where you came from and how much you've grown. I used to get embrassed by my old poems all the time :D Any way just wanted to say that i like your work hope to here more from you on here.

is HORRIBLE. Don't get sucked into their scamming.

As for this poem, however...woah, I love it, and the simile of the sea. XD that sounds funny.

Why are you embarrassed? It is a good poem. (I embarrassed. I juzt no it)

Awesome work. But I do have to place this warning to you about . They told me I was being published in a book and so were four of my friends and when one of them ordered it only their poem was in it and none of ours, so I reackon it is a huge SCAM! Just because of my experiance with them, I wasn't published lie they had promised me.

Awesome poem though, I just thought I would place that warning.

it's beautiful... _ great job!

I thinks poems written in the heat of emotion can be the best. This is one of them. i think many feel this way. one day bravery will come to up the great writing!