that's seriously ** up. they were both paid to kill each other? or wait! did the boy think he was going to shoot him instead of the resturant owner? that's really ** up.

oh she should have got him first! the irony! great story. i really enjoyed it. you should consider continuing it. what grade did you get for your class? here's to hoping you got A+!

HOLY CRAP! Aww..that's so sad! I liked it a lot, too. It was so nice. I can't believe the irony of it all... gasp... GREATNESS!