That would soo ** me off too. Note To Self: Never ever date someone who has a twin brother, and get drunk. Anywho. good story!

I like it. It's pretty good. (better than me I must say) From the way you talk I presume you are doing a sequel?? If so, I can't wait. TTYL

you should turn this into a story. it's pretty good.

Well that sucks! I sorta feel bad for Dani, only that though because she did cheat on her boyfriend. But those two are unforgivable!!

i hope there's another chapter because i'm still i bit confused with evan and dani. if evan loves her, then how is she alone?

Wow..that is terrible. All of them were messed up..but still I felt bad for Dani in the end, I cried just a tad :( It was good, don't be so ** yourself, if it was really THAT bad, would you have posted it? hmm. Good job.

Wow...I have nothing else to say, that's how good this was...and it was very sad...but good job!

Wow O.O That was so unexpected haha! I can't write one-shots for beans...so that one really hit me ** the head. I guess it shows reality though because it happens a lot to teenage girls now...being used I mean =S not sure about that situation though. I liked the dialogue and idea =) You might not proud of it, but I like it haha! Write a new one soon and update your stories! ^^

Let me get this straight. YOU ARE ONLY MAKING ONE CHAPTER OF THIS??!!?? It was so sad. Great one!

Not bad, though I like foxified better :P Hint Hint.

Though yeah, a follow up chapter would probably be good, explaining the relationship between Erik and Evan.

its good, you should write a second chappie, to explain the follow up and why he did it and evans response but yeah very gd!