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just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 8
wow. nice jb. im so glad she decided to talk to caroline. jamie...i dont like him much, and didnt caroline say earlier that her brother was 17, or does she have two brothers? please update!
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 7
wow, nice job. jamie took that differently than i thought he would. i really l;ike your work
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 6
*gasp* how does he know?! but nice job. i super love your writing :]
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 5
nice job. its great. i hope she can go back home soon
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 4
wow. i wish she would tell him. and call ashley. nice job
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 3
i think i see this going badley. not right now, but in the long run.
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-26 . chapter 2
wow. i think i sorta like this guy. nice job. i really like this.
just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
wow. thats intense.
swellhats 2008-01-18 . chapter 8
i quite enjoy this

please update soon :)
Aphrodides 2006-08-10 . chapter 6
Busted! That was an awesome twist to the story, I wasn't even expecting that! I hope you continue witht this story. Update soon!
plastic figurine 2006-07-31 . chapter 6
Ohh, I love this. Jamie sure is acting like he is using Lily... hmm. Men. Anwywho, I l o v e. Can't wait for the next chapter. Check out my new story Eyes Open Wide if you got some time.
Wayward Ballerina 2006-07-31 . chapter 6
It's awesome. I love the cliffhanger.
NO LONGER USING 2006-07-30 . chapter 6
WOW! I can't believe he knows. You'd better update sooner please!This is getting really good and the ending waslike cliffhangerish...great job keep it up girl!
plastic figurine 2006-06-15 . chapter 5
Aah, I love it. Hopefully there will be a huge Christmas blowout with Lily and Jamie...
NO LONGER USING 2006-06-15 . chapter 5
yup, another great chapter...Ilove how you potray the character's problems so well..and the ocnversation flows naturally...I feel really sorry for her best friend..Ashley worrying about her like that...but o well...

anyway glad you updated so soon...

~Lacy
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