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| Kusje 2006-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this. I'm sure we can all relate to something like this, and I loved the italics and bold. You did a great great job. I love it.. |
| Cum grano saltis. 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI really liked you`re poem very much, you could relate to the feeling of the protagonist quite well. in my opinion you put the stress on the right points in the poem. the rhetorical questions in the end helped to express the desperation the person feels.(sorry for my dreadful english, I`m still learning) |