That was awesome! Everyone must come to realize that they are awesome, I am starting to understand that now _ anyways, I like it Keep writing love ya lana

its very. .

good poem. somehow i feel it could be better expressed as a non-couplet or even as a free verse, but that could be biased to my mainly free verse poetry. then again, i write strangely. The imagery is pretty and the themes is moving. It sounds like you really love her, very endearing.