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| Aillen 2008-02-05 ch 1,  | abuseOuch. *Wants to give you a hug* I can relate to this VERY much. Again well done, straight from the heart. BTW thank you for reading and replying to my poems. If you have time check out the rest of my poems. |
| first-casualty-of-war 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very strong piece of work, and you can almost feel the pain you wrote about. Great job =) |
| NejikeruAme 2006-06-14 ch 1, | abuseGood work. You wrote that from the heart. I hope you write more. |
| WolfCub14 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow You a good poem I love both of them! keepinmg on wirting girlie |
| NowNameless 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds just like me... Good...Couldnt have put it into words better myself. Keep writing and posting...Thanks for the reveiw! :-) |
| Lonely Cupid 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abuseGood one! Though I usually love poems with rhymes, I like this very much still for its honesty. Nice work, good content! :)Hoping for more poems to come from you, jessa faerie! :) |
| laughing in her sleep 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abusethis is so sad but i really like it. u did a beautiful job of portaying the hopelessness(yikes is that a word?? doesnt look like one...) keep writing us*A ps. thnx for all the reviews! |
| Kris87 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAwesome poem, very straightforward, but still with so much emotion. Unfortunetly, maybe the reason I found it so good is that I can relate so easily. :( Still, great job! :) |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-29 ch 1, | abusegreat poem. i love the line 'she didn't deserve the acceptance of an apology' awesome writing. good job :) ~dropsofjewpiter~ |