i love the idea of the wind whisking away its beauty. nice work.

Some where boas...wear

I like this.. well written and interesting

woah... i don't think i'll ever pick or press another flower again... sheesh. lol

Beautiful phrasing, your words and ideas here are quite lovely, and yet also haunting.

'women of the night' particularly struck me, but there were so many wonderful lines.

Well done. :)

Wonderful word choice and flow. This really captures the imagination. Great write.

Wow, you're really an expert at this, aren't you? I thought I was about to read a cliche flowery metaphor poem, but instead it was the complete opposite. I would point out a favorite line but I loved each one, everything was just perfect. LOVELY. A definite favorite.