wow...i am pretty much speechless. this reminds me of one of my friends 'tecna' and once she gets started, she continues with such passion and becomes oblivious as to wat is going on around her. lol. thanx for sharing this and i agree totally...especially with the bit 'thought and knowledge are completely different' because we can have knowledge but our views can be totally wasted. altho of course, knowledge is important in its own right. anyway, this was lovely with its blunt and careful way of putting across ur ideas...like ur other reviewers sed, u mite wanna split it into paragraphs and work a lil on the sp and grammar...but overall, its awesome :D

loved it, and remember, even if there are complications, we can always make it thru if we try hard enough,

~mez~

You wrote this a bit clumsily, but I won't criticize your style. Instead, I'd like to compliment you on your philosophy. A lot of people are so empty and carefree, they don't bother to burrow deeper and look for the answers to life.

I danced around the prospect that love is eternal, but came to the conclusion that there really is no 'true love.' The steps to love, in my opinion, are these: friendship, interest and slight obsession, physical contact, and understanding. Ultimately, there is no love that can't be shattered. It's just a jumble of emotions.

Most people 'love' more than one person in their lifetimes. No animal actually 'mates for life,' and humans, being animals, fall under this category as well.

Anyhow, this is supposed to be a review, so I'm gonna stop rambling now. ^_^

Great work.

Well, if you want people to read it, break it up into paragraphs, expand on your utterly confusing sentences, and fix your spelling.

Love is what you can find the most thought. I believe is the most beutiful, best emotion i can feel, but it can also be the most damaging when it either crashes, or its not true to what it should be, or if it wasn't meant to be at all. Yet when it works out, and you are truly in love, it can bring the most joyfull happiness that you can find. YOu find that true, that eternal love, and your set for life. A warnign to all though. Nothing is perfect, and you will always find complications in your life. True love is the same.

check out this last section, some lines are a little awkward and there are some spelling issues. but otherwise, you hit it all on the nose, you got life down to the T as much as it can be.

Really well written. Honest and clear enough for an outsider to follow along. Nice work. ^_^

thanks, that was lovely.