Reviews for Angels Fall First

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sleeping Pisces 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abuseThis was a much, much better poem than I expected. The word use here was just unbelievable (divine wrath, Crucifixion, Ragnarok, Elixir) and the flow of the song worked well in spite of it. I really liked the first and last stanzas. I can honestly say I haven’t read a fantasy poem this good in a long time, so well done. Oh, and I love the title, but I'm also a Nightwish fan so that’s probably why. Peace, Daze
CRaZy-OdIN 2006-07-25 ch 1,	abusereally good quite apocolyptic imagery there. its well written, and good topic. thanks for the reviews. keep up the good work. take care
from beneath the bell jar 2006-07-07 ch 1,	abuseWow awesome phrasing. Great diction as well. This was very beautiful in a haunting sort of way. There were so many lines I admired here like "religion will destry the facets of God" and "bellowed back upon the Angels wing" Great piece!
Hidden Lies 2006-05-03 ch 1,	abuseyeah, about the same as all my other reveiws... I am really lost for words, that and I have a cramp in my leg.
simpleplan13 2006-04-07 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. the italics are great
xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-04-06 ch 1,	abuseawsome, love, sorry i haven't reviewed this one yet...anyways...keep it up!--pammy-
Kusje 2006-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI really loved the title of this poem, but I loved the poem too. I'm always into these kinds of things, anyways. Thanks for reviewing mine!
Ben Wuest 2006-04-05 ch 1,	abuseI love your use of Italics, lately; they really add effect to the reading of this and your other poems. Your poems, J, have something my songs can certainly never have; unique imagery. When I read your poems... it's hard to explain; I just see things differently - in a good way - than how I read poems of others. B.
elvenstorm 2006-04-04 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful and such a stong powerful poem! You use amazing imagery and your use of italics empahsises points rather than just being over used like a lot of poems these days. Love the line 'religion well destroy the facets of god'. That seems to really strike a chord. Well done this is an excellent poem.
n-Iceness 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abuseI'm speechless, really.. It's great! And thanks for your review...
Bong2 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abuseOMG, such a fantastic piece of work. Tragic but it is art in the form of words. Good word diction and imagery too. Keep it Up!
fragileHeart101 2006-04-01 ch 1,	abuseu seem to get all your good ideas in maths.. which kind of scares me...
Chemically Induced 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abusethe imagery and the title is awesome. i love the final, violent sense of cataclysm here. religion will destroy the facets of god is an eloquent line of truth. but, i don't really like the italicized words. without the font augmentation your phrases and words still have shattering force and emotinoal power, so i say just let the words handle it. otherwise, yay! another cool-as-hell poem :) love, c.induced.
method acting 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abuseI dig this. Especially the last stanza. "The End of Innocence, seeing is believing,Man shall kill man, and child alike;Fury engulfed by flames of hatred,A destruction only tempted by lust."If such pandamoinum has ensued, then why is demolition only tempted by lust? I love the imagery, such chaos...but does the last line refer only to the line above it? Or the once above that as well? Or was, perhaps the second to last line refering to the second line...This mistake was common in my reading. I mean, I can apreciate this piece most definatly and the vocabulary is stunning, but there are some bits where compmrehension is difficult. Like, things could go different ways. The first stanza, bestow what? Or is that just general? Or is it refering to the line above it? I'm awful at old english. But I'm studying it right now, so perhaps not for long. Thanks for sharing, this piece is excellent.
deathtotal9 2006-03-29 ch 1,	abuseHm, someone is a Nightwish fan, eh? The detail in here is good, really good. I like the very first stanza the best I think, the image of the sky tearing and all is pretty powerful. Apocalypse pieces are usually pretty interesting and yours is no exception.

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