amazing. I love your writing style. ^^ write on!!

This was a bit confusing so I had to read over it a few times to really get it, but it is actually really deep. I saw a kinda depiction of helplessness...enjoyed it!

I find it utterly amazing how well you write and English isn't even your first language! That's is astounding! I'm very proud of muh iddle Joana lol ^^

I took a break from KH2, Theninja, and writing to read and review, and its was well worth it because ... you are awesome =) okies well I'll probably be on laters, so0o to0dles!!

Yes, reviews are good for the soul and writer's self-esteem. ^_^ But they're also good for eating, drinking, breathing, talking to, and glomping. And anyway, this poem was very good (all of yours are, really); you must keep writing, becuase you evidently have much skill in it, even though English isn't your first language. I guess it's a miracle that I took a break from Kingdom Hearts 2 to get online and see that you uploaded this, but it was still the least I could do, after all, since you're probably the best reviewer I have. I'll talk to you later, okay? Shalom ^_^

well done

^_^ This is really good. Excellent work. *applaudes and gives you a choc-chip cookie*, write on!

~Anna~