Reviews for The Name in the Sand

DemonicDestiny 2006-07-15 ch 1,	I like the rythem to it. You describe everything o great by making the poem long. Keep writing, Angel
Jassenah 2006-04-16 ch 1,	Very nice, your rhymes are good, they don't sound forced. People who balance each other often get along well. Gotta have some common ground though.
fairEtales 2006-04-08 ch 1,	I really like how the speaker contradicts themselves...It adds a nice touch to it. But, I think that the rhyming is forced. You made it work for the first few lines, and then afterward, the beauty of the rhyming died. I am sure that you could have made this poem a lot better and with so much more emotion if you hadn't rhymed...just a thought. Otherwise, wonderful work.
keesa 2006-04-07 ch 1,	wow..amazingI really really like thisyou have a lot of talent
Farran 2006-03-31 ch 1,	Such wonderful imidry. Mixed with such stark and effective contrasts.
Yaolyn 2006-03-30 ch 1,	That was nice. The opposition made me think of Yin and Yang.
Single Black Rose 2006-03-30 ch 1,	i absolutely LOVE this poem...i refuse to flame it, and no worries, i bet nobody else will either...keep up the good work chicky! ~Single Black Rose