Okay, at this point I have to wonder why this story hasn't been published as a novel yet. I'm only on chapter five and I am in love. In which the beautiful girl isn't always the happy one and appearance shouldn't have to matter to find love. That should be the importance of Disney movies. Gah! I need to read more.

I must say I’m not that fond of romance stories, but this story I could easily tell would grab me. And I regret not reading it when I saw it a while ago. There’s just so much good in this story I bet a lot of people have already told you the the good and bad, so I’m just going to keep this short. The characters where great, the plot was wonderful and the emotions where astonishing. I really couldn’t find anything to complain about.

Stories like this make me want to strive to become a better writer, and that is the best compliment I could give a story like this.

And I really hope you get this published and that you can get your story off of B&N (if you haven't already of course). Plagiarism is such a nasty thing and no one should have to deal with it. I wish you the best of luck!

That's so stupid. I hope you got everything fixed up and that this never happens again. This is a really good story and it's really dick of someone to take it.

This story is amazing and honestly that "author" should be ashamed. Thank you for this beautiful story.

Hello! Its just amazing how well you coincided your story to the fairytale of Cinderella! You fill in the gaps(that can very well be there) of this fairytales past with quite a dramatic edge. I just love it!

Hello! This is a really awesome beginning! Very capturing. The whole seen just drew me in! Enough said. I'm going to read more!

I think I'm joining the masses of worshiping fans.

...Okay, maybe it's not that bad. You don't have to worry about me stalking you or asking for your autograph or anything, not that I know how in the world would I manage such a thing, much less what that would accomplish.

Anyway. If you haven't run away or gotten bored or something and are still reading this for whatever reason, I am very much in awe of this story. Normally, I stay away from anything with a main focus on romance. As in, ten-mile-radius stay away. But this had me captivated... sheesh, my sister is going to laugh her head off at me enjoying and complimenting a romance story. Once she manages to pick her jaw off the floor, in any case.

Right, it's not just simply a "romance story", despite it being very much a part of the story. Again, I express my amazement- you somehow manage to retell a fairy tale into something that is very far from the original, yet has the original storyline woven through it. Plenty of characterization and no shortage of characters, but not detracting from the story. A "heroine" that is appealing to readers- me, anyway- yet not even toeing the line of Mary Sue. I'm very impressed. Trying to balance between virtues and flaws is difficult.

Rider

I love this story so much and I'm sorry to hear about the plagiarism. I wonder... did it end up working out on B&N?

You're going on my list of favorites. I love your story to bits. Thank you for sharing this marvelous work! I really do hope it works out. I can't imagine how horrible it must be for somebody to steal your own creativity and ideas. You have my sympathy and prayers...

Wow this was amazing. First time a story ever made me cry. :) fantastic job.

Dear Miss Michelle,

I know your story from ficpress, have known it for years now.
I was wondering when you will update, or are you waiting to publish? From a Publishing Company or Indie Website (like CreateSpace)?

Please reply and thank you for your time
Crystal

I just noticed you have no way of telling me that, so you can e-mail me at RivalSilverFan at hotmail dot com

Is it off now?

Yeah... We will..

Yes. He is.

No it means you're mind is too clouded and you need a ride an a loop-the-loop roller coaster to forget all of your troubles.