I love how sincere your characters are. You really have a knack for writing believable and approachable characters.

Cassandra

This chapter is so sweet and innocent. Although Dru did play the dumb card once. Tisk. Tisk. lol.

Cassandra

Excited about Alexander's entrance!

Cassandra

I read this story a long time ago and really enjoyed it. But I think that was before my reviewing days. I had lost track of reading with the second book in the "Kiss of Twilight" series and wanted to go back and reread the entire series because I remember it being so wonderful! I really love the characterization of Drusilla.

Cassandra

This story is great. I thought everything flowed together nicely and detail you described everything in made me feel like i was standing right next to Dru as she lived her adventure! Now on to KOT!

oh my god! this is so awesome, one of the best i've ever read! it's so rare to be able to read stories like this. thank you so much! xoxo

I love this story. Your writings are simply wonderful.

I totally loved your story, I was as engrossed in it in the beginning as all the way through. I'm going to read your sequel next.

It saddens me that Helena is pretty much destined to be a Dru and Aurora is destined to be a Cindy. I should probably read Helena's story before I ask these questions, but will Aurora and Helena be cursed with the relationship Cindy and Dru had? Will the stupid, selfish (in my opinion) Cindy ever realize the errors of her ways when it comes to her daughters? (Spoiling one and ignoring the other?) Will Cindy ever love Helena, and will Aurora be different from Cindy? (Pllease let the answer to that be "YES"!)

I'm REALLY confused about the ages in this chapter, and pretty much throughout the whole story so far, but other than the whole age non-clarity, I love this story! :)

Wow. This was amazing. I can tell you I don't review often, but after reading this I knew I just had to.

This story was so captivating and so well thought out. Dru isn't some weak shy girl that you see in stories. She is just...Dru. That's what makes her so special. The characters were so fleshed out and the pace was perfect. At times it seemed to rush a little, but I loved it. I can't really give constructive criticism because I don't quite know what to say. There were practically no mistakes which made me happy!

Don't give up writing. You have a knack for it! I have no clue why you only have 300 reviews. O_o

Now, I feel all fluffy! _

I read this story a few months ago, but I didn't have an account that time. I love your story. I have to say that I like Cindy's character the most. The way her personality is, I love it. Sorry, though. I can't give you any constructive critism. To be honest, I don't know what you can improve on.

All in all, it's a very good story.

OMG. Wonderful story! I loved every single minute of reading it!

I finished it in two days! I just couldn't stop reading! :D I love love love love love this story and really cant wait to read Kiss of Twilight! I'll go do that now... Anyways, thank you for taking the time for writing this great story! :]

Hannah

In this chapter, you mentioned taking your story down, but please dont! I need to see how this story ends! Its a great story and you are an awesome writer! As for publishing, I wish you the best! But I also have a suggestion. In this chapter (chapter 6) I think you should put the letter in italics as to not confuse the reader.

Best of luck with your publishing

Hannah

Has anyone told you that this story would make a marvelous musical? I'd see it :]

This was an amazing story, and I haven't enjoyed a story as much as I did this one for quite a while. Excellent work!