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Reviews For: Tear Me Not Apart
Travis C. Eckert 2006-07-03 . chapter 1
Lets just say this is enough for me to add you to my favorite author's list.
Werelynx 2006-04-05 . chapter 1
Again, this is a poem that can tug at your heartstrings. I am still amazed at the amount of influence your poems have when read.
The Postscript 2006-03-31 . chapter 1
Bold, fresh and powerful. Great work. Keep writing.
TinuvielDork 2006-03-30 . chapter 1
Wow. Such anguished pain. Is this someone who died in warfare? It seems as such. Such wonderful imagery - painful imagery, definitely, but brilliantly written.

Very moving, especially "You, who now watched the smoke-filled sky, With eyes glazed and unseeing and dead" and "As I sit on the ground, Screaming, pleading, living". It's weird saying I like it a lot, since it's filled with such awful feelings, but it is a terribly beautiful poem.

Much love...TinuvielDork
common-sparrow 2006-03-30 . chapter 1
Väldigt fin denna :) gillade början "that one of them were my own".

men visst är det bra att engelska finns. Det finns ju fan ingenting som rimmar på svenska :P

keep writing! // fellow kålrot
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