 TinuvielDork 2006-03-30 . chapter 1Wow. Such anguished pain. Is this someone who died in warfare? It seems as such. Such wonderful imagery - painful imagery, definitely, but brilliantly written.
Very moving, especially "You, who now watched the smoke-filled sky, With eyes glazed and unseeing and dead" and "As I sit on the ground, Screaming, pleading, living". It's weird saying I like it a lot, since it's filled with such awful feelings, but it is a terribly beautiful poem.
Much love...TinuvielDork |