|Reviews for Warsong|
| letyoursoultakeflight 8/10/09 . chapter 1
*claps* I like it! Its lovely and simple and works well!
| Tritsch 12/29/05 . chapter 1
i love how, in the first two stanzas, the first and third line are full rhymes and the second and fourth are slant rhymes. I was a bit disappointed to find that wasn't the case with the last stanza, which makes it seem like the slant rhymes in the first two were a "mistake", or the last one you just copped out on. try editting it to make an interesting slant rhyme at the end. It .is. the theme you began with, after all
| BayRider 12/9/03 . chapter 1
Great job on this poem, its very good. good rhyme and good wording. i think this poem has lots of truth in it and it touches the soul. wonderful job, keep it up!
| Snooboostoo 10/30/03 . chapter 1
Short but perfect I love all of the lines
| The Confuser 2/23/01 . chapter 1
An obscure message is often hidden in the unintentional words of a sentence. Never have to look if you know what to look for. Reis'Dem'Naca
| Spindel 2/23/01 . chapter 1
I like that one..In english class, we need a poem done by someone other than ourselves... I think I will use yours.. :)