Reviews for I'm closing my eyes one last time

Chocolate Marshmallow Boi 2006-12-12 ch 1,	abuseWOWe. Nice writing you've got there. True enough how experiences make writing a more authentic deal than just words to be read. You breath your words life... although this poem gives you the solid idea of death. Lovely paradox! :) if you have time, read my work: 'Beautiful Words' It isn't angsty or something, but I think it can helpyou. dont forget to review arayt?:P
Doll in Pink C0nverse 2006-08-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. I mean WOW. That was sad. I'm a addict at reading poetry! You'll just never see my writing it my self. Hehe. Thanks for reading my story! I really like this poem it's sad...real sad. The words fit so well (That sounds weird, but it's true!). -Tweetz
The Un-great-ful 2006-05-24 ch 1,	abuseA nice sentiment. Was there any reason why you should write it? Or did it just feel necessary? Good one. Keep writing alan
Neaera 2006-04-06 ch 1,	abuseOmg! So sad!! But so very well written! Keep it up huns!! You're doin awesome!
thePelican 2006-03-30 ch 1,	abuseIts simple and straight to the point. It really touched me. This poem. For some reason. It really did touched me. I liked it a lot.