Beautiful.

"The diamonds that cut into your / vision is scarcely worth the bleeding / for my behalf -- I wish I / could strip away your burden, alas my / touch is acid to your paper-thin defenses"

I love that line.

You always create such heartwrenchingly beautiful imagesLove, unrequited love, anything that involves the heart just hurts too much.

again, i luv it! especially ur form

aw, he sounds relle sweet tho.