I like this story, have read it a couple of times but there is one thing in this chapter that confuses me.

In the last chapter she mentions that her brother knew Lucio (which we knew he didn't) but in this chapter Lucio says that she doesn't have a brother.

So does she or does she not have a brother?

Wow I just read the whole thing and wanted to let you know what a great job you did with it.

I just found this excellant story. It was great, definately a fave. Looking foreward to reading more of your work.

You know what? I'm new to FictionPress, I actually only found out about it today.(I'm one for FanFiction .net) So imagine my surprise when I find that I absolutely love the story I randomly picked to read first.

It was fantastic. The characters were great, I really liked Lucio eventhough, you know, he was dead and all. The storyline was brilliant aswell. I gotta admit though, I was a little apprehensive to begin with as I was unsure about the whole mafia thing, but I soon got over that.

Great job.

You know what? I'm new to I actually only found out about it today.(I'm one for So imagine my surprise when I find that I absolutely love the story I randomly picked to read first.

It was fantastic. The characters were great, I really liked Lucio eventhough, you know, he was dead and all. The storyline was brilliant aswell. I gotta admit though, I was a little apprehensive to begin with as I was unsure about the whole mafia thing, but I soon got over that.

Great job.

You're right...I'm glad I'm not missing out on your literary genius :P lol This is really good so far...I feel so bad for Joseph though :( And reading Before th Ghost is kinda helpful b/c I automatically knew it was Joseph that was crying in the hallway :_( So sad...Okaywell this is all I have time for right now, but I'll definately read more later!! Ttyl
-Megan

oh. my. gosh... I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! WHEN I FOUND IT I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE OKAY BUT THAN I CONTINUED READING IT AND I FELL IN LOVE! OMG! YOU ARE SO TALENTED AND SMART! YOU MADE EVERYTHING FIT AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES!

Wow! o.o This is good so far! I love it! ^.^

aww its over *cires*

ok WOW this story was absolutly AMAZING and i'd recommend it to ne1! i can't wait to start the prequel!

the only sad thing was the fact that Lucio had moved on... i mean he had to eventually... and its not like he could come back to life or nething...

but yay she got wiv Joseph! lol

well done! a great storyline!

kat x

aww he came to her house! omg omg omg omg omg *cries* the next chap is the last one! *cries*

kat x

aww her mum is being nice! lol

erm... im glad she'll be coming outta the hospital soon...

bless Joseph

aww and i feel bad for the nurse! lol but it was funny... i can imagine my mum doing summat like that lol

kat x

aww she cud sleep wen Joseph came! aw thats so cute! :D

i hope she comes out the hospital soon bless her... i HATE hospitals... especially there food! lol

kat x

yes! this chap was reli gd! im so pleased that Gemma's parent's are ok about the whole mafia thing... phew lol :D

kat x

Wow! it done...time flys...Great ending,i like how everyone just seemed so...i dunno,everybody knew thier place,no acwardness.

omg i just got an author alert and saw that u've updated the last chapter! *cries* omg i hate it wen stories come to an end... but at the same time u wanna read em to find out wot happens! lol damn it...

neways love this chap Gemma and Joseph got to talk for a bit lol

but a big uh oh... to her parents finding out i wonder how they will react...

kat x