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| sunshineofyourlife 2006-06-17 ch 1,  | abusewow. so...all of your work is excellen! i can't wait to read more! please update soon! i can't wait! --Sunshine :D if you'd like to make any extra comments on my poetry...which i would really appreciate since we seem to be on the same thought track, my e-mail is sunnybandfreak07@hotmail.com |
| Amalia Jagd 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abusei really like this poem. im not too sure about it being a poem though, but i really like it. im not quite sure what the hidden meaning in here is, but i really like it. good job! |
| Tipped 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I love the innocence portrayed and the repetition. Kudos. |
| AuthorNinjaEarth 2006-05-02 ch 1, | abuseSounds like the seed of a wondeful poet. Excellent work! Feel free to check out my profile for a special link to a Christian group as well as for more Christian works that I've written. Thanks for sharing. |
| Needa S 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseSounds very original. Beautifuly done. |
| Un Arc En Ciel 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked this poem. I like the way you used the metaphors. BTW, thanks for the review (^_^) |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abusetruly hopeful, the beginning of life. nicely written keep writing! |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Especially how you said "she'd carry me off to somewhere safe and bury me in the soft sacred soil." Sacred was such a perfect word for it...wow, I love this piece...on my favorites! |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abusevery sweet story... I like it a lot |
| Stories-have-souls 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseThat is a truly beautiful Nature poem. Written from the heart. It's got such a loving, tender feel :) |