That is REALLY creepy. It gave me shivers at the end. Good job!

Oh my gosh, that was good! At first I was like ok, this girl is weird! But then it go SO so creepy at the end--and i LIKED it! It was suspenseful, and I also am glad that you didn't drag it on.
Like other review said, powerful, amazing imagery, very dark...and the suspense was great.

LOVED it

Well, that was incredibly creepy. And strange. I really liked it, though. It flowed really well, and you didn't over detail everything, which made it better. Good job!

Creepy... I loved the end

Wow, poetic...powerful. The cutting her stomach part reminded me a lot of Yukio Mishima's novel "Confessions of a Mask". The only part that I didn't like was the very end line, which sounded very Hollywood.

this is incredibly awesome..

That. Was. Insane.

I came into this expecting some fluffy girl-on-girl action I could laugh at, but I never expected something THIS powerful. Wow. I don't even know what to say, except that I absolutely loved it. Dark, disturbing, and filled with twists. Very, very well done.

Oh my ** god.

You /have/ to write a sequel to this. I'm going to go check out the rest of your stuff - this is pure beauty. Evil and twisted and fantastic.