 Pretzal 2008-10-14 . chapter 3These are really sad!! But really good!! |
 FishCat 2008-04-20 . chapter 3Poor Katie! It's a very believeable story and I don't know whether that's the best or worst part. Probably best. Never stop occasionally posting stories! |
 FishCat 2008-02-13 . chapter 2That was very true of today's culture. I think he should have taken the money anway, but good people will always choose others over themselves. |
 FishCat 2008-02-13 . chapter 1Talk about awkward "Hey! You! I have a gun- oh, Mum,Dad, hi". Not th best way to get reaquainted. |
 bansira 2006-12-27 . chapter 3What a beautiful writing!
I liked all the three stories... especially the characters. They're all so... human, complex, real? even though they only have this short appearence.
Loved it! |
 MadFearow 2006-06-17 . chapter 3Those were pretty cool stories! I loved the plots and the descriptions. You did a good job with the character's emotions as well. Keep up the good work! |
 Shadow Gryphon 2006-06-06 . chapter 3That was a very nice, bittersweet story. I liked how he talked about how grant was unknowable, and his bitterness over the rich. And even though I know it's right, it still irritates me that he gave it back. Still my idea of morality is rather subjective because of the courses I've been taking lately.
Very well done. I hope there's another soon. |
 Move Mercury 2006-05-11 . chapter 3Again, an amazing job. I love how heroic this guy becomes, in something so small. To many people it may seem like a small victory, but it is definitely - despite the title of this collection - not whatsoever unimportant. Major kudos! |
 Aikida 2006-05-09 . chapter 3Bwahahaha! I like it! It reminds me of Soshi from Absolute Boyfriend a little. Great job on this, it really is realistic. |
 Shadow Gryphon 2006-05-05 . chapter 2Ooh! Very, very good ending. I don't see any other stories here, but I hope you upload (or re-upload) them soon! |
 Shadow Gryphon 2006-05-05 . chapter 1That was neat. Simple, no bother with names, just a story. I liked it. |
 Aikida 2006-04-26 . chapter 2Bwahahhaha! You end them at the perfect points! I love it! I love this one. Bersa Thunder Nine. I like how it's been personified as a female. Bwahahhaa. Crack crack. Great story by the way, the distress was palpable, accurately worded, and just enough detail to carry the reader along. The dialogue was nice too. Identify yourself kinda reminds me of those dorky nerds who think they've been abducted or something. But that's okay.
^^ |
 Move Mercury 2006-04-25 . chapter 2I thought this was really, really beautiful. And it proves that, when in the hands of a great writer, it's the 'smaller' things in life that can prove much more intense and exciting than a dragon duel or gun-toting car chase. This is the first story to go under favorites, and you're only the third writer to go under favorites. Keep it up! :) |
 wildwolffree17 2006-04-02 . chapter 1Well done. |
 Aikida 2006-03-31 . chapter 1Aw... hahaha. It's so sad at the end. I liked the shortness of it actually, left something to be desired, but in a good way, a lengthening of it instead of wanting mroe in the plot and depth. So, this was a good piece, though I think if you do the one shots, you should just make a one-shot chapter thing so it doesn't triple and quadruple your account with stories that are half a page long. It just seems more fitting that they get put together even if the parts aren't related at all. Just put that in the little info in the top so they know. Great job on this! |