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| Maranwe Telrunya 2006-04-06 ch 1,  | abuseIt's very good. What struck me the most was the strong witness of faith in almost every paragraph. I'd like to correct one thing, if I may: When speaking of God, "he" should be capitalized. Thanks for your review and suggestions on "Defiance". It is much appreciated, and I've made the changes. Have you any other stories written? I hope so- I look forward to reading more. Maranwe Telrunya. |