Great job.I like this. Its so emotional. You broke boundries I've just figured out how to tear down in your writing.Keep it up. :D

My situation isnt quite as bad, but I can definitely relate. The anger and bitterness were well expressed, but at time a little over the top. Some parts left me hanging, like "I wont give you the satisfaction of owning me for the rest of your life". i think the poem would be more powerful if it were longer.

dark and rather emotional... good work

keep writing!

Daddy's girl... God I'm such a pervert. Anyway, pretty powerful piece here. The "daddy" in question sounds like a bastard, and I hope things improve for you if this is about you.

Woah, powerful! I can really feel the emotion in this. Well done, and keep writing!

~Anna~