So sad...

I like the semi-repetition of the first stanza at the end; well done.

Wow. This poem is beautiful and I'm sure many of us have been that little girl at sometime. Some of our best poems are the hardest to write.

This poem has real feeling to it. When I was reading it, I felt it, too-you've got a rare talent for emotional artistry. Why don't you try writing a brighter poem? I'm sure it'd be really good.

This is a beautiful poem. I'm so sorry - were you the little girl in the window? If so, it's wonderful that you were able to write this poem. Know that all of us out here reading your work are here for you! If we weren't online, I'd offer you a hug-

Much love...TinuvielDork

Beautiful, I don't know about constructive critisisim but this definitly reminds me of some things I've had to deal with too. I love the ending to this. Keep writing.