This is experimental, but at the same time simple (if that makes sense :P) and it really works! I can relate. Love it.

oh! This is awesome! I love the way you worded this and how the poem seems to have a double meaning. Wonderful work!

~Hawke

Ahh, yes. The insomniac in me feels you. That familiar feeling that you've just forgotten the single most important idea you'll ever have due to the fact that you're drunk with fatigue... like being stoned.

I sense the cold, mechanical lives of the day-sleepers around the world in this free verse.

Nice use of text styles.

hmm don't know what so say.. this is so different.. so.. not you :Sbut it has something.. it's special!..in a good way!

Whoa...that was really good hun. So...different...and unique. Very cool! I liked it alot. I...wow. I don't even know what to say. Lol! Nicely done..love ya mucho *hugz*