I think this will be really cool if you keep going. Most dreams are really weird... are you going to put night mares on this or just dreams? anyway this is really good... update soon!

OK, guys, I really want this to be edited, but I don't know how. Could you tell me?

okayy... well, what can i say? i mean, its definitely a dream,judging by the way the events happened... lol i dont get the fishy part... i agree with Scraper tho... try making them into a story!!

When you mentioned this might "freak out little children", I admit I was rather intrigued. However, I think the better phrase be "confuse little children". This entry is too garbled and fast paced, too much like a dream. Slow down, add a little more description! I keep my own dream journal and I find that incorporating it into a story is a better way to go rather than writing down the actual thing.