hey, i love ur poem. can i borrow this for my fic? thanks a bunch. more power!

it's really simple, yet there doesn't seem to be much depth to the lines. i don't know, this poem didn't do anything for me.

Cute. Reminded me of a little kid playing peek-a-boo. Cool. Great job.:)

not my favorite...however...it's still well written...and so like who u r :)