Well I would be scared too Galdor! Real or not, dragons are SCARY! He shouldn't have stormed off, that wasn't very nice.

*shakes fist*

But the fight with the Dragon was AWESOME!! I loved it, and I totally knew it was a Dragon both the elf named it. Go me.

Anyway... WRITE MORE! Urg.

Aw. I am sad about not reading the runes.

Manil is smart. I like him. Yay!!

And I like Galdor. He's really sweet to Tarin, it's so cute. I got squishy.

*whistle* Oh man! That unkinked a whole lot of explaining!

What a cool vision. I would probably freak out if I had a vision about anything... but anyway, I like Enelya, she's funny.

"Hey wake up! NOW GO KILL THINGS! BWAH HA HA HA!!"

Oh poor Tarin. I hope she accepts her destiny!

Wow. Their home is so... magical. I was enchanted to read it.

I especially liked your descriptions of Tarin's breathing, and the laughing. When she was having trouble, and Eauthrin calmed her down, that was nice imagry.

That's good they're safe. I was worried. *phew*

Man, I had to go back and re-read the last chapter! It's been so long.

Anyway, I like how you descibed Tarin staring at Findecan's face. That part just stuck out to me.

I added you to my author alert. I really like the characterization on Tarin so far. Plus the elements of prophecy, while nothing new, are quite well added.

I do think some descriptions could be beefed up, but other than that, I am enjoying the pace of this story.

Wagh! *gasp* That was really intense! I thought someone was going to die! And then I would have cried and cried!

Is Pansoic deformed from using a crossbow his whole life? I read that somewhere... crossbow experts were deformed from the pulling action.

Anyway, this was really cool, *does some ninja moves* I liked all the ACTION!

Why doesn't anyone else review this? It's a really cool story. *shakes fist at at other readers* REVIEW THIS!!

Aw! I was hoping the handmaiden would go with her! :( I'll miss her.

Yay adventure starting! *shakes finger at Tarin* You didn't do your homework!

I hope nothing goes wrong for Kaina while they're gone! And I hope they make it across the river! THIS IS INTENSE!! WAH!

O! A dream! Foreshadow foreshadow!

Anyway, I liked at the beginning when Kaina bowed to the people... instead of them bowing to him. That says alot about what kind of king he'll be. Very reassuring.

I also *loved* the way you described the elf! So very cool, so very very mysterious! I must continue!

O Goosebumps! Goosebumps! I loved the little flashy-backy. It was a nice snapshot of 'How it used to be'. Those always make sad situations more poignent.

Anyway. I think I like the brother... though I've barely been introduced, I'm excited to know more, but I suppose there won't be much since she's leaving.

Ah well

There are more hotties yes? lol j/k

I LOVED the very last line of this chapter: "where a black gown had been set out for her." So final, runs your mind through every funeral you've been to and identifies with them. AWESOME!

Keep going!

The formatting problem came back at the end. I think Gremlins are living in your story.

Anyway WOW! Nice plot development/twist/why is the next chapter the last one I have to kick you now...

I LOVED that! Now I'm excited.

Oh! And when you described Okela delivering that final message I was so touched! That was beautiful! Especially Tarin saying: "I know."

Right so, rolling right along, on to Chappie four!

Eep! What's in the box?!

I liked your description of the king in this chappie, very vivid. And Tarin's reaction to things was also well written, I liked how it all seemed ot flow.

Great work! (BTW whatever was up with the formatting in Chappie one is gone now). I'm moving on!

I like this a lot more than your first version. Especially the description of the settings. Yay settings!

Um, just so you know, in case you haven't looked at the actual uploaded page, there something messy going on with the formatting at the beginning and end.

Anyway, on to the next chapter! *rubs hands together eagerly*