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Reviews For: Shattering Control
a lonely september 2006-06-02 . chapter 1
this sounded like it was going to be really sad from the first stanza & stuff and in a way it kinda still is sad, but the third stanza lightening things up... this was well written tho...
Mephistophelian 2006-04-29 . chapter 1
...wow...just wow...

all your work is very powerful, this one is particularly striking. Not only is the subject matter refreshingly origional, but the rhyme and the meter are perfect. I read it aloud, it just sounds so cool! You have a few typos but nothing major, otherwise it's perfect.

Thanks for sharing!
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