| Reviews for Shattering Control |
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a lonely september 6/2/06 . chapter 1this sounded like it was going to be really sad from the first stanza & stuff and in a way it kinda still is sad, but the third stanza lightening things up... this was well written tho... |
Mephistophelian 4/29/06 . chapter 1...wow...just wow... all your work is very powerful, this one is particularly striking. Not only is the subject matter refreshingly origional, but the rhyme and the meter are perfect. I read it aloud, it just sounds so cool! You have a few typos but nothing major, otherwise it's perfect. Thanks for sharing! |