O wow! This story is really awesome so far. I love the idea, even though it wasn't really original. However, enjoy these kinds of stories, and I think you're doing wonderfully. Keep writing, and please tell me when you update. Thanks!-gabi

This is a very entertaining story. I was extremely disappointed that you haven't wrote Chapter 5 yet! I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next! Why does Oliver look so familiar?

Chapter 1Very nice and full of potentioal. I thinck i spelled that right. I enjoy the characters and the main plot. Being honest, you could discribe the land more. Are there praries or forest? Hills or plains? how big is the village? How far does Lord Madoc's "land" extend? Discribtion of land in the beging is always helpful. Some times it sounds like the people are speaking 'old english', and then they are not. I did like it very much.

You know that I love you, and your writing is amazing. There were a few funny boxes randomly inserted in there, but other than that, a-okay! I love your writing style - it's very grammatically correct and follows correct form, but also has it's own style and wit. All of the characters are loveable, and their interactions are superb.