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| Medieval-Rogue 2006-07-05 ch 1,  | abuse*claps and laughs in good spirit* I LIKE this poem (heh, no pun meant). The beginning caught me, with the bold and italics, and it seemed biographical, if not about you, then it definitely gave a better view than most poet's do, who keep it reserved so that it can be applied to anyone (which is great!), but this was definitley a nice switch on what I've seen. The end line, of course, was funny, and the content was lovely. Excellent poem- ~Cheers to that!~ |
| SwitchVale 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI liek the way you wrote it, the broken feeling really makes it work well! |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the repition & change in format of I like you and the descriptions of you & him are cute and that last line is great.. cute poem |