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Reviews For: The Sky is Blue

Gypsy Pink
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. It would be really cool if it was set to a song.
janajyo
2007-01-17
ch 1,
abuseThat is so cool! And in a way it does make sense. the only part that didn't as much was:
"All else is a silhouette,
and no more and no less"
O_O Oddly enough I think this is my favorite poem of yours. :D I like your rythm! cool.
JJ
Agent Firefly
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseI love the way you chose to make this rhyme. Also the little parallel phrases: "no more, no less," "it'll come, it'll pass"--they add to the conversational, imaginative tone of the whole poem. While it seems like a basic truth, the way you view the sky is different to me: as something that remains steady while the world turns under it. I usually think of it the other way around, so this is a fresh idea. Nicely written!
Pheobe Meryll
2006-05-17
ch 1,
abuseI love this! It's like a little kid's song but definately more meaningful - just a little musing on the sky, half philosophical, half poetic. Reminds me of my story "sky's edge," actually. I shall put this on my favorites list *clickety* keep right on writing dear!
Kahn the Hun
2006-05-15
ch 1,
abuseInteresting, It has a fun rythm. Not much else to say... LOL.
Princess-anna57
2006-03-31
ch 1,
abuseI wrote a poem like this once! Great job, I like it a lot. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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