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| A.R. Mouse 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseYou say there is nothing beautiful about this poem? Well I beg to differ. The poem is genius. You cut straight to the raw emotions, skipping all of the fancy diction and wordplay, making the poem intence and powerful. Very deep. Very real. Very epic (something I see consitently in your poetry). Amazing job. MOUSE (oh, and thanks for your reviews! Their greatly appreciated.) |
| Needa S 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Awesome job. Thanks for the kind review and keep on writing. God Bless. |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI can identify with this. I like how simply it is, with a simple message. Very beautiful word choice in free verse. |
| Bloody Penhand 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseShort, but to the point, and it is oh so true. Wonderful poem: it makes me think deeper about life. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-31 ch 1, | abuseCaptain! How are you? I adore the first line. Great way to start. The poem overall is fantastic and just excellent! Go you! *applaudes*, keep writing! ~Anna~ |