You have real talent.I wish I had some
of it.Be proud.Thank you

Wow these are amazing.I'm impressed.
I usually don't read other people's
poetry because usually it's not worth
the time, but yours proved me wrong.
Thanks for showing me it's not hopeless.

killer chipmunk

Very interesting. It made me think of what would happen if I died.

Good job.

Update the rest tomorrow please, this is getting kind of annoying, no offense.

lol, it reminded me of fahrenheit 451 as well. idk why but it did. I also thought of Sam's song in return of the king, "in western lands beneath the sun..."

Well written, I like the rhyming scheme, it has a good flow and rhythm to it.

hmm...i liked it..for some reason it reminded me of the book fahrenheit 451.