I did not like this poem simply b/c of the little bastard that broke your heart and left it shattered forever.

I liked it a lot itwas really good... i liked itexcept for I know who u were talking about... so ya but w.e. good writing keep writingu ROCK!

laurel

I like how the first two rhyme (can't spell so sue me) and the second to don't rhyme, yet at the same time sort of do. And I like that you have it repetetive with the same line! Sounds good and emphasizes the point!

That was incredible expression, so simple yet so emotive. Something everyone can relate to which makes it tragically appealing. Beautiful work, keep it up. =]