 Bekah Stargazing 2006-04-23 . chapter 1I read this one out loud to my mom and she liked it a lot, as did I. Very nice job. I love the concept. I love how you put yourself into the poem as the non-conformist. I also very much like the sounds this poem makes as you read it aloud, especially 'Tonka honka trucks.'
Nicely done, Bekah number one.
~Other Bekah |