Whoa, and you thought I had good descriptions? This was amazing.

"They injected the sky with filth from the hypodermic needles of smokestacks protruding from the factories whose shadows fall like a blanket over the cities below."

Excellent line, and the thought behind this entire piece was original. It fills your head with pretty metaphors, and it really stops and makes you think.

Wow! Benji, this is a real work. I enjoy your allusions to the heavens and the way you used God as the cause of Global Warming.

I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up!

+ F.W