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Reviews For: Realtionships
Vyvyan 2006-04-01 . chapter 1
Nice...I liked it.
run rabbit run 2006-04-01 . chapter 1
odd. but neat. cheers-rabbit
Swiss'd 2006-04-01 . chapter 1
Nice. I like haikus.

However, it seemed a little fan-girl-ish to use the word 'koibito' in the middle of an otherwise-English poem.
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